edit-undo's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Walk-Smash-Walk]

One of my favourites!

I dunno what the previous reveiwer was smoking, this ROCKED! The sheer pointlessness and randomness is enough to make anyone fall in love! Keep on dreaming!

[Thanks for all the fish!]

You should have made the actual movie!

I loved this, it was much better than the actual HHG2TG film which was, its got to be said, rather crap.
I gave a 10 for violence because violence wasnt neccessary in this ;-)
Make more music videos liek this, you have great skill! This flash is now in my favorites list. Well done, keep up the excellent work!

[Hasbro Armageddon]

:-)

it was good while it lasted, excellent for a first flash (most people produce complete crap on their first submission :p). Although, for the duration, i felt as it were just an introduction leading to something bigger...then it ended. Suggested areas of improvement: length, graphics, action, and sound. It was a good idea though. Well done, good luck in the future, etc...

MegaJohnny responds:

You're quite right. From writing to Flash movies, I tend to be concise and short in what I do. Anti-climatic finish too... I'll try and avoid these in HA 2, so watch this space =]

[.::THE CHAIR::.]

i dont know WHAT the other reveiwers were watching

...cos the graphics on this were great :-) in my opinion anyway... i didnt really get the plot, but who really uses a plot these days? one thing though, dont just resubmit stuff which was already blammed without improving it considerably... i didnt see your previous attemp though, so what would i know? good luck in the future :-)

[fraym bye fraym]

WTF... but in nice way

That was wierd... very abstract, must have taken you ages in f-b-f. Maybe next time stick to this crazy morphing line thing but add characters and some kind of story or message. k? :-) good luck dude/dudette

fireball-lock responds:

ill try that ty, and its dude.

[Sex, Science and You: 01]

great!

Might be slightly odd, but still very funny! I'd love to show this to a n 8 yr old kid and see if he believes it... keep up the good work!

[Real Men]

GREAT!

That was awesome! I was laughing most of the way through, I'd love to see more like that from you. I like the simple graphics :-)

[Dapple]

Is this finished?

Newgrounds is a place for animations. There isnt nay actual animation here! I think you need to illustrate the story with animation and sound, definitly add some background noise. If this is supposed ot be an interactive story, put interactivity in it!
hope this helps :-)
it was a nice story though

[NarshaDar - #1: T.O.L (T)]

Could be good

I think that this could be quite a good animation when its done, I like the way it kind of goes with the music... but one thing, are'nt trailers and preveiws supposed to go in the alphas section..?